Why kids should stay up longer, because parents stay up longer their for children should spend more time with them.
When I go to bed I stay awake for ages,that's just wasting time i could be doing things.
Parents are always tired so I should stay awake, because I have lots of energy.
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Hi Noah
ReplyDeleteI like your persuasive writing, really like your comment about parents letting kids stay up later so they can spend more time with their children.Great argument. Can you think of any other reasons kid should be aloud to stay up late. I think they should stay up late so they can do the housework,what do you think?
Keep up the great work.
Sam
Kia ora Noah,
ReplyDeleteClever thinking Noah - you have provided some good arguments. Do you think you could provide some more information about your argument. You could explain your reasons with an example.
Keep it up! Miss Gill.
Hi Noah
ReplyDeleteA great start to a persuasive argument. I look forward to hearing some more ideas that you have to support your argument. What sort of things could you be doing if you stayed up longer?
sam i like your thinking i migt do it
ReplyDeleteHello Noah
ReplyDeleteyes I agree we should go to bed later next time can you make it longer and add capital letters.
anyway I'm looking forward to see more on your blog.From Lucy