This is my descriptive writing. I have chosen some of my favourite sentences. Which sentence do you think is best?
Friday, November 26, 2021
Wednesday, October 20, 2021
Why should kids stay up longer.
Why should kids stay up longer?
Why should kids stay up longer? Because parents stay up longer there, children should spend more time with them.
When I go to bed I stay awake for ages. I am bored, that's just wasting time.
Parents are always tired so I should stay awake, because I have lots of energy.
It's unfair that parents get to watch tv and stop watching when they want to go to bed. Kids could do housework like cleaning up their bedroom. If they are in bed they might start not breathing in their bed.
If they were in bed and still in there for 10 minutes they would die but if they were out sitting with their parents they would find that they would be in the hospital. It happened to me once and I went to the lounge and they just heard me say I can’t breathe they took me there. I got better, my Nana from Australia visited.
Follow just for that with my dad,they could ask if you wanna play with them you should because then they'll no you better than they do now.
You could read with them, help do their homework if you are free, and play outside with them if it doesn't rain.
Build something with them like a snake,and watch tv with them.
You could write a story with them
In NZL. by Noah c
Thursday, September 2, 2021
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